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"Awh..." I moaned. It was incredibly hot, and it wasn't even full summer yet. I had braced myself, but being stuck at Mom's home really wasn't good--especially when the air conditioner broke. I stripped off to my underwear and a light t-shirt, and closed the door, turning my fan on the way. I could hear Nudge and Angel talking in the room beside mine.

"Max thinks about Fang a lot," Angel was saying excitedly. I raised my eyebrows and made a mental note: Lecture Angel about thought-peeking later on. "And Fang thinks about her, too. I reckon they're in love."

'Reckon'... I thought. Angel must've been reading the dictionary while in the bathroom again, I guessed. Then I processed what she had said. Me? Fang? In love? I stifled an irritated scream and pressed my ear closer to the wall.

"Yeah," Nudge agreed. "Like... can't you see how they look at each other? It's like, a romantic movie or something. You know, those who are pals-in-crime and then they get caught and they make out and..." I opened my eyes as wide as truck-tires as Nudge kept blabbing about.

I decided I had eavesdropped enough and plopped down--right on the wooden floor. I didn't care I was half naked. I just needed some miracle to cool the air... If I could convince the evil scientists in Itex to make a huge fan or something... Yeah, right. As if they weren't busy enough with... um... recombinant DNA? Grafting DNA into poor babies? I don't know... that kind of stuff.

"You hot?" I heard. I suddenly froze in place. Fang, I innerly complained.

"In which way?" I said playfully, jumping up and acting as if I wasn't hanging around in my underwear, poking him in his... oh no! Fang didn't have a shirt on... oops...

Some silence moments before, after seemed Fang to consider what to answer, he said, "Both."

I raised my eyebrows. "Ha-ha-ha. Very funny, Mr. Jokester."

A quick smile crossed his face, so fast I thought I had really imagined it. It wouldn't be a surprise, this heat could easily make you see Gummi Bears floating around.

"Not kidding," he said. Jeezum. What would take him to utter a complete sen-- Wait a minute. He wasn't kidding?

"So... what are you up to?" I asked, trying to change the subject and moving around one of Ella and Mom's guest rooms.

"Not much. Iggy and Gazzy are outside blowing up the woods. Nudge and Angel are... talking." Had he heard them? I was scared. As in, nervous. You know, guys, Maximum Ride never gets scared! "Only you left."

I crossed my arms in front of my chest. "So I'm the last option? Comforting, huh?"

"Some prefer to save the best for last." He simply said.

I stood there in awe watching him approach slowly, gracefully. He grabbed my face and kissed me--right on the lips. This counted three times. I was getting addicted to him. Wait. Ignore that sentence.

As it happened the second time we kissed, the lack of oxygen forced us to break apart, gasping. It was a funny scene. It turned even funnier when I saw a small gleam in his dark eyes as he mouthed out, "Love you."

Alright, this was totally unreal. Totally un-Fang-like. I was like wishing to wake up from a dream. Would someone please pinch my arm? Thanks in advance.


As he leaned in to kiss me again, I feared my leader state. "Wait," I said, his mouth inches away from mine. My heart was beating fast and I was still light-headed, so I couldn't think straight. I forgot what I was going to say, so I added, "Love you too." Before he kissed me again.


You know, guys, summer heat kind of plays advantage sometimes.
OMG! SUMMERSEA WRITES MAXIMUM RIDE FANFICTION! :heart:

Yup, I so couldn't resist making a Fax (Fang + Max) Fanfic. Um... for those of you who haven't read it, you have two options: a) critique just for the heck of it (like, for the writing--even though you don't know who the characters are & such) or b) back off XD. No, just kidding. Option A is more suitable, ne?

Alright, it takes place at Valencia and Ella Martinez's house, in Arizona, after the third book. Sorry if it's completely and utterly pointless, but I felt like writing Fax fluff.

This is dedicated to two super-duper-mega important peepz in my life:

- My bestie ~pilirocker (who I am oddly dedicating everything to her these days :P )
- My iSister ~Solitaia (who has helped me, chatted over MSN... *adoration* )
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dolphin4dreamer Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Student General Artist
:happybounce: it's so good! FAX FOREVER!!!! :happybounce:
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PhoenixIsBored Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
:D
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marshalleelover Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice :3
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booklover4life Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AshTheWolfey Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow this is sooo cool when i first started reading it i thought it was like an excerpt from the book but this is soooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AshTheWolfey Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
nevermind
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AshTheWolfey Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ummm... how do i read it/ how do i get to it?
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ilovecassandraclare Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love fanfiction!
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maximumridefan01 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student General Artist
nothing to say but that i luv it sooo much!
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Madsie-moo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg, looove this! haha very cute. I <3 Fax, they are adorable!
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hpwand Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, i love this so much! you have great voice when you write, and it really sounds like Max. Wonderful!
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beautifulBrightstar Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS SO AWESOME I CANT EVEN DESCRIBE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
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DragonoftheMoon13 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay!!!!!!!
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SierraxTsubasa Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute cute cute! I loooove Fax.....even if I love Fang. Sorry Max.XD
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I love it you should write more Fax fluff!
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aradia430 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011
wow you matched James's writing pretty nicley! epic fax fluff btw, we need more MR lurv!! :heart:
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sasukefairy Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
CCUUUTTTEEE!!!
AAAHH FANG WHY!!! D:
Just read fang. Made me cry.
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maximum-ride-fang Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fax fluff is always needed.
^^
i live for maximum ride, it is AWSOME!
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OMGLight Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011   Traditional Artist
OMG <3
i'm so much for of a figgy lover (I think Max is... qinpmgfelq.) but this is so sweet :)
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Rulesprincess Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
F***/SCREW YOU, YOU M***** F***ER !I don't usaly sware but FAX is the only one that makes sense plus it is the only one that is in MAXIMUM RIDE and it is better than any other MAX couple.
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Rulesprincess Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I need toCALM. DOWN. NOW. but I am not Kidding Loading... 
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maximum-ride-fang Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL I LOVE YOUR SIGNATURE.
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karissaisme Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Thats good- Reminds me of this conversation +"Obsessive much?" "YES!" "Okkkaaaayyy".....My friends think I'm too obsessed, Faxinites Unite!!
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becausepandas Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
this is so awesome- sounds like it came right from one of the books!
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bookworm951 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011
do you have an actual fanfiction account? cuz i'd love to read and review any more fanfics you come up with properly. is there more to this one?
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summersea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I actually do :) You can find me at [link] , but I don't have/will have any new stories :( Sorry! Maybe someday though...
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unicorn6110 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
GREAT JOB. Now continue...
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bluemoonkwl Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
totally awesome!!! more!!!!
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Ghryffin Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
yaaaaaaay, Max finally got over herself and let herself kiss the self-proclaimed "not emo" (psh, right) dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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FloridianFruitBasket Featured By Owner May 30, 2010
SO AWESUM!
I love Fax! You write it really well :)
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Gentlewolf Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009
I've been dieing for some FAX action. I just started to read The Final Warning, and James Patterson is driving me nuts with the one chapter a book of Fax action, then Max flying away! PLEASE say it gets better! Poor Fang!

Anyway, great story! Loved it! :XD:
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summersea Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
The 5th book, MAX, has all the fluffy goodness you could ask for :) But for now... :P TFW has some fax moments as well ;)
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Gentlewolf Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009
Guess I better hurry and finish reading "The Final Warning" then so that I can move on to "Max" :XD:
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PercabethFan33 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist
I love it :) it was really cute :)
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IGGYSlover Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
hehehehehehehehehehe...
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Xx-Shipon-xX Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
Haha! That was absolutely adorable! Love it!
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BubblegumMorphine Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009
hehe that sounds like something that would be in the book <333
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sam-chaos2368 Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy Jeez, this fanfic kicks butt! Lol, for lack of better description...

You have Max's POV down. It sounds so cool, I don't think James Patterson could do it any better :) Love how Max didn't freeze when he kissed her, but actually took it seriously for once! Great work!
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summersea Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much! It's awesome to know people still like it :)
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sam-chaos2368 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do! I'm sure tons of other people still do, too!
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Delusionist13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student General Artist
LOVE IT
(cudda played up the shirtless-ness a bit more tho ;p)
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hoshitotsuki Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009   Digital Artist
Yeah, I agree. You really have her voice down.

However, I think that that was.. yes. Very Un-Fang-Like, haha. Maybe draw it out a bit, elaborate. He was a bit too quick to make comments. :P

Pretty much a job well done.
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summersea Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah, the Fang OOC-ness is one of my biggest mistakes.
But he's just so... difficult xD
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hoshitotsuki Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009   Digital Artist
Isn't he? I just wrote one, it was almost impossible.
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Starlit-Rain Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009   Traditional Artist
Of all the Faxes I've read, you speak in Max's POV the best.
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summersea Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! Glad you think so :D
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ShadowRose18 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Hehe! So cute and fluffy! I loved it! ^_^
Fax is AWESOME! If there is someone out ther who doesn't love, I'll personally hunt them down and kill them D< Rawr! XD Maybe not that extreme lol
Awesome job!
Have you put this on Fanfiction.net? If not, you should! You'll get a lot of reviews for it :D
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