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I stared at my reflection in the mirror, running a hand through my clean hair (unbelievable, huh?). It didn’t look like me. We’d been too busy with that funky saving the world business to take care of ourselves. But we were having a break at Mom’s house, and it was doing good for everyone.
I smiled at myself and turned to the door whistling some weird commercial tune when I realized that Fang was staring at me from the doorframe. I felt the heat rush to my cheeks.
“Hey. ‘sup?” I said smiling, hoping for the blush to be invisible. I wished my cheerful mood would distract him.
“Not much.” He answered with a quick, imperceptible shrug.
We stayed looking at each other for a while. Ugh, was it an uncomfortable silence! I started moving again to get out of my room, when he spoke again.
“You look pretty,” he said. “With… the clean hair and your new clothes.”
What? Was I becoming deaf, too? I mean, apart from having my father speaking in my head 24/7…
“Wow, thanks, Mr. Complimentum Guy.” Complimentum Guy? My snazzy-snappy responses needed to be practiced—fast.
He sighed. For a moment I thought he looked annoyed, but he covered his face with a mask of indifference before I could make sure.
“I’m serious, Max.”
I stuck out my tongue at him and went into the living room. It was the best escape I could think about.
But, what a surprise, he thumped a hand down on my shoulder and whirled me around.
“Ow,” I said, rubbing my shoulder. “What’s your problem?”
“You know better than anyone that my compliments are scarce,” a quick smile spread over his face, then disappeared. “Why can’t you take them seriously?”
I shrugged. “It’s very weird for you to say that stuff.”
As Fang he as he was, he only raised an eyebrow as an answer.
“You… you never say stuff like that without a good reason,” I kept explaining myself. Wait! Was this what he’d been intending? For me to admit all this? I felt a sudden urge to punch… no, it was more like an urge to kiss someone. Ack… never mind.
“And?”
“Well, you must’ve had a good reason for saying it…” I said, looking at the floor.
I looked at Fang, expecting him to laugh in my face or something. But instead of that, he leaned in and planted a gentle kiss on my—you guessed—lips.
I should let Fang compliment me more often.
I smiled at myself and turned to the door whistling some weird commercial tune when I realized that Fang was staring at me from the doorframe. I felt the heat rush to my cheeks.
“Hey. ‘sup?” I said smiling, hoping for the blush to be invisible. I wished my cheerful mood would distract him.
“Not much.” He answered with a quick, imperceptible shrug.
We stayed looking at each other for a while. Ugh, was it an uncomfortable silence! I started moving again to get out of my room, when he spoke again.
“You look pretty,” he said. “With… the clean hair and your new clothes.”
What? Was I becoming deaf, too? I mean, apart from having my father speaking in my head 24/7…
“Wow, thanks, Mr. Complimentum Guy.” Complimentum Guy? My snazzy-snappy responses needed to be practiced—fast.
He sighed. For a moment I thought he looked annoyed, but he covered his face with a mask of indifference before I could make sure.
“I’m serious, Max.”
I stuck out my tongue at him and went into the living room. It was the best escape I could think about.
But, what a surprise, he thumped a hand down on my shoulder and whirled me around.
“Ow,” I said, rubbing my shoulder. “What’s your problem?”
“You know better than anyone that my compliments are scarce,” a quick smile spread over his face, then disappeared. “Why can’t you take them seriously?”
I shrugged. “It’s very weird for you to say that stuff.”
As Fang he as he was, he only raised an eyebrow as an answer.
“You… you never say stuff like that without a good reason,” I kept explaining myself. Wait! Was this what he’d been intending? For me to admit all this? I felt a sudden urge to punch… no, it was more like an urge to kiss someone. Ack… never mind.
“And?”
“Well, you must’ve had a good reason for saying it…” I said, looking at the floor.
I looked at Fang, expecting him to laugh in my face or something. But instead of that, he leaned in and planted a gentle kiss on my—you guessed—lips.
I should let Fang compliment me more often.
Literature
A Knockout Kiss
Fang grimaced and started to lift Max up. They had been practicing self-defense, and he had hit Max a little to hard. It being 3 am might have had a little to do with it, and her flying all day looking for Total after he chased a female dog, but he hoped that she was okay. In the middle of picking her up though, he stopped and grinned slyly. It was time for a little
payback, say. He chuckled and set Max back down. Then, he leaned down and kissed her.
Max woke up because something warm was pressing on her mouth. She opened her eyes and saw Fang with his eyes closed, about 2 inches away from her face. She was tempted to smile, but knew t
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fang? ch.3
Ch.3Iggy
I hold his own knife to his throat, my shoulder still bleeding.
Look whos laughing now, I say.
Wait! How long was I out for? Shouldnt the others be awake? Fang asks.
Nope. Its only been a few hours. But maybe if you scream loud enough, Max can wake up and come to your rescue, because you were helpless. I laugh maniacally.
Iggy, Im warning you, killing me now wont do you any good. If you kill me, Max will be heartbroken. Shell never want to date another boy. You would be making a relationship with Max impossible, not eliminating the competitio
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Movie Night Fang's P.O.V
Movie Night.
(This time from Fang's P.O.V)
I waited patiently for the quick rhythm of the song to increase, concentrating on the metallic echoes of the electric guitar. I was mildly aware of a yell from Iggy, but didn't bother to open my closed eyes, knowing that it was probably just banter between him and Gazzy. The lights went out and someone squished into the sofa next to me. Max. I knew it was her because my nostrils received the scent of fresh popcorn, an association built from Max's incapability to grasp cooking. Popcorn was the only thing she could "cook" and due to this, it was always Max who made it. Couldnt argue with that, well
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Although it is completely pointless, it's fax fluff. Sorry, but I had one of those "IT'S TIME TO WRITE FAX" moments and I couldn't let it pass by.
However, I'll write another more worked-on fic later on.
Although it is completely pointless, it's fax fluff. Sorry, but I had one of those "IT'S TIME TO WRITE FAX" moments and I couldn't let it pass by.
However, I'll write another more worked-on fic later on.
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